It was a first class hotel. Fifteen stories of modern materials and straight lines. Our 8th floor balcony was ample and fitted with two lounge chairs. The balcony was on the right inside half of the “L” shaped hotel so it faced in a sideways fashion all the balconies on the left side. Both sets of balconies were facing west and in this gentle paradise the sunsets were spectacular.
Instead of answering her, I began to kiss her neck. I knew she found that very sexy. I blew kisses on the back of her neck and along the large muscle on the side of her neck up under her ear. We faced each other and I gave her a tight hug pressing her breasts up against my chest. The kissing lingered and got both of our engines running, her body squirming against mine. She was wearing a little summer shift dress and my hands easily reached under the hem and began to rub the back of her legs and her panty covered ass. “People can see us doing this,” I murmured. She nuzzled my neck as if to hide her shyness. “In fact, I can see one of the couples watching us. He’s pointing at us as I’m rubbing your ass.” Something about the idea appealed to her.
“Let me play,” I said and I moved a little to her side. Still standing I could now rub her ass with one hand and moved the other to her braless breast. I kissed her shoulder. The sun was beginning to set among the distant clouds and the colors were ablaze with light. “Relax,” I said and she began to go limp as my hands roamed over her body. I moved one hand under her dress and all the way up to her breasts lifting her dress to her waist. I looked over her shoulder and scanned the crowd. There was about 4 couples on various balconies and at least two of them were watching us pretty intently. On another balcony there were two young women calling a couple more women in from the room and pointing us out. One of the women quickly returned inside with a disgusted look on her face but the remaining three continued to watch.
I'm glad I waited until bedtime, so I would have a little treat for making it through the day. This one was totally delicious and very sexy and sensuous.
This was very well written, and one I had to read all the way to the end... Thanks... now if I just had my own surrogate handy right now. :-)
I had to cross my legs reading this. You tease and build to the climax like a master of the art form. Friends, meet the next Henry Miller.
WoW! That made ME blush. Intense! :)
Wow, Rushmore... as usual, you just blow me away! Thank you.
Wonderfully hot, Rush....I felt like I was there....:)
Wow, I never knew I was such a voyeur until I read this, Rush. I like the way you switch between the external action and the internal thoughts/feelings that's driving it. Sort of like a personal peepshow. :) Thanks for creating this and sharing it.
Rush you are a naughty boy.... Now, go to your room and write some more!
Rush as good as anything you have done so far...and that's saying a lot
Effectively depicts the excitement, awkwardness, and bliss of the first time.
Rush, I went back and read the first two, now this. It's a provocative story, extremely well-written. You are very gifted.
I really enjoyed it (but I've enjoyed everything I've read of yours). Everything’s so sensual, a real feast for the senses. Just how I like it.
Nice read, Rushmore! i read the 6th and 7th paragraphs twice so my "hubby" thanks you! He just doesn’t know it yet!
Rush, you are the master of this form. LOVED IT!
I always enjoy something like this when a man writes from the womens perspective. Well done!!
I think I am hooked to your writing. I am without a lover for a month (he is in
Rush, you are very talented. Yet again I am amazed at how wet this story has made me.
You're amazing. How do you keep on putting out the words? Fantastic writer. You always have a good story line, not just porn. And remember, if you need practice, I'm here in
Great story, totally HOT!!! Love it!!!
Rushmore, enticing, erotic and enchanting.
Guys need to take notes Rush.
Oh, Rushmore! Oh! Oh! OH!
I loved it. I can't wait to whisper this one to my hubby tonight... Maybe I won't even give you proper credit and he'll just think I'm the most hormonal and exciting woman he's ever met. My favorite part was about his cock being at ....Jennifer F.
WOW! Are these true stories, or do most of them come from your head?
I've never met a man that could write erotica as well as you do. Your wife must love this aspect in you. I have loved your work thus far and I am looking forward to reading some more of it a little later (my body needs a lil rest). ;)
Such an erotic threesome. I am totally gripped by you writing
I need to stop reading these at work. Well done.
My question is: are you a man or a woman? Yeah, yeah, I read your preface. I do not like porn. It offends me. This is delightful! And oh yeah, I felt it!
Very good one, Rush. However, I wouldn't really recommend wearing a Dolphin on a commercial flight. Might break the ban against the 4 oz of liquid rule ;-)
I'm thrilled to find your work. I loved this story and I plan to explore others as well.
You continue to amaze and humble me Rush, and that’s just the emotional response, as to the physical response, umm I think I need a shower, and uhh is it me or is it HOT in here.
Excuse me, I hear a cold shower calling my name.
Cold shower? I think not I am going into the bedroom and enjoy myself-some more!
I love your writing. This was terrific! Thanks.
Anyway - good for you Mr. Rushmore, sir. You seem to know some good technique - as the uh, whole story, would imply.
Rushmore, Thanks for that, Sweetie.
Your skill is evident as a writer and pleasurer!
Your stories would make for a good bedside erotica book for couples...or singles with toys.
This was wonderful erotica. I was totally not expecting the oh god part and that was a nice twist there for a girl who was still shy at 40!
Excuse me there's a puddle in my chair!
well...that was really hot and steamy
Well written, not trashy, perfect erotic sensation. I'm itching to re-enact it myself.
Very provocative, sexy setup for a story, Rushmore. This one gives us the point of view of a thrilling opportunity that might as well be taken. Your writing is so smooth, I read this in a heartbeat, and so had to go back and reread it to catch all the nuances. You really are a supremely accomplished erotic fiction writer, using the senses to catch the sense of the forbidden.
A polished piece of prose, Rushmore. I like the fact that you've focused not on the consummation, but the seduction: those first, electric touches, the sweet dilemma of a woman deciding whether or not she'll surrender.
sexy yum yum ~ seduction is good ~ especially when one actually wants it ~j